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Hello,Boys and girls.I am a new student,your new classmates.Nice to meet you.I am from shen zhen.
My name is Xia Qianqian.My first name is xia and qianqian is my last name.I am good at telling stories,but I don"t want to join the stories telling club.I like music ,because it can make people with relaxed.So I can play the violon and the piano,but I can"t sing.This semester I want to join the music club.This is my self-introduction.I hope to be able to get along with you.
一年级:20琴弦微凉
My name is Wu Yuwei .I’m 13 years old. I’m a Chinese girl .I study in Xinqi PrimarySchool.I’m in Class 3,Grade 6. I’m in Row 3. I have many friends in class.For example, Che Lei is my best friend . She is 13 years old , too. She is a good girl. We often help each other.There are four people in my family .They are my father, mother, sister and me .My parents are formers . They work hard. My sister is a student . I love them and they love me ,too.
Hi!I am a happy and quiet girl.I am from Chin.I am twelve years old,I am a pupil,I am in Class Three GREad Four.I many good friends.I like many pet,the peacock panda rabbit and bird,they are lovely.I am tall ,I have around face,these are big eyes small mouth small nose on my face.I have a black long hair.I like eatting apple banana eggpiant chicken and...I like music sing run pinting...I often saying: book is my good frieng,I like it!Whate am I?Yes,my name is Lv Enhui.
Do you like me?
hi!I"m Zhao Ziwen. I was a happy boy.BecauseI had a happy family.but,I"m very very sad now.Why?Because my dad isn"t health. he drinks alcohol every day.he is angry every day.My mom is sad,too.So I grow up can"t drink alcohol,I can"t! I"m only 13 old,but I"m clever.I have a noble dream! I want go America!I want to go to havord!I"m confident!HaHa! My birthday is in July. I love building blocks.My favorite food is hamburger! I want have a look the world.The very very large world!
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Hi! I"m Zhao Ziwen. My birthday is in July. I love building blocks. My favorite food is hamburgers!
I was a happy boy because I had a happy family. But I"m very very sad now.Why?Because my dad isn"t healthy. He drinks alcohol every day. He is angry every day.My mom is sad,too. I won"t drink alcohol when I grow up. I won"t!
I"m only 13 years old, but I"m clever. I have a noble dream! I want to go to America!I want to go to Harvard! I"m confident! HaHa!
I want have a look the world. The very very large world!
修改教师 ：Andy老师
六年级:赵子文
My name is Yao Yuru, this year twelve years old, is a Gemini girl, is also the Nanchangthird day seven class of students.
I am a healthy girl, because I have a good eating habit. I was a vegetarian, I often eatsalad lettuce silk, carrot stew and fried cabbage. The fruit is very healthy food. I likeeat star fruit, cherry, peach, grape and kiwifruit. But my favorite fruit is blueberry.
I like sports. I like to play badminton play tennis, because they are very easy and interesting. My favorite sport is playing basketball. Oh, "the little dwarf reincarnation" I just love basketball this movement, this is baffled. Don"t look at me is a small but girl,last visit to his alma mater, I play basketball with a group of old classmates with a university, but I grabbed a few times high school seniors ball! For me is that even the "three ball" "gatekeeper" is what all don"t know beginners, but I am very proud! For my height, playing basketball is very difficult, but fortunately the pain in music, it is veryuseful and interesting. Why useful? I wonder if you have not heard of, plenty of exercise can promote bone growth, especially for jumping movement!
You are a healthy girl? If not, please try to let oneself become a healthier!
初一:苏悠柒
在事实面前，“如果”这个假设永远不可能成立。这是我今天才刚看过的一部电影中的台词。很巧，这句话应验了。
我想靠自己，虽然我很懒，没有耐心更不勤奋，但是我有要强心。在这个五十多天漫长似的暑假里，也有许多很有意义的打算，计划。不过。。。它们也只能靠想象描绘轮廓了。我有要强心自尊心还有很多心，而现实则是一把刀，一下一下的刺了这些心。
毁梦……
我想靠自己，靠自己的努力，取得自己想要的东西。而不是靠给予，靠索取。
一个平凡普通的家庭，再有钱，什么都买得到么？钱，买不到用心还有努力，更买不到欲望。更何况，家里的钱不是台风那样忽然刮来的。那是我的爸爸妈妈用时光和汗水换来的。有时候我会觉得自己是个小孩子。可有时候又忽的像个八九十岁的老人，连死亡，都感激伸手即来，却挥之不去。随着年龄的增长，不在乎钱的我也对“钱”这个字眼有些敏感。对，不是因为它很珍贵，而是，它，来之不易。
我想有钱，用钱。但是，靠自己。这个世界上有好多我喜欢的东西。有的，再多钱也买不到；有的，没钱一下也碰不到。我不想一直过那种靠爸妈的日子，我也会心痛他们劳动得来的钱。可面对我讨厌的现实，五光十色的东西，我被打败了。死要面子……
我不想每次买什么东西都要花爸妈给我的钱，即使他们心甘情愿无私奉献，我也无法看成理所当然心安理得。我会很不舒服不踏实。
悲哀……
又想到一部韩剧，那个女主角说人生本来就分甲跟乙。
对！甲就是那种生在不愁吃穿穿金戴银的家庭里，想干嘛干嘛，天生丽质天资聪慧，没有什么办不到更没什么得不到的。
而乙是生活在平凡普通或许有些贫穷的家庭里，为吃穿算计，凡是都要凭努力去打拼，可结果与付出不一定成正比，房车卡无一不需自己的苦命奋斗族。
人生只有甲跟乙，我是乙。
如果人生只有甲跟乙，我做乙
虽然羡慕嫉妒渴望甲，但比起乙，甲的生活很好，好的遥不可及……
初三:2乐童童
I"m happy to have such a good summer holiday!Of course,I have many things to prepare.
First,I need to make a plan about my holiday.I will do my homework 5 hours a day,and I want to read some famous English books to improve my English study.Then, I will see some funny comedies.Mr.Bean or Tom Hanks"s movies all cool! They can relax myself!If I have enough time,I will go dancing swimming! I wanna keep fit,you know!And,I will spend some time on my math.I always be careless on the math exam.I want to be careful!
I really have a large number of things to do,maybe It"s a bit busy nervous.but I like this sort of life.I will try my best to do these tings!I believe myself,I can do all of them!It"s nice to have this kind of courage!
My Free Time
I have a lot of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school.I like basketball and volleyball very much.Sports help me to keep healthy and study better.I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening.Sometimes I listen to music for a while.I find it a good way to relax myself.Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends. I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking.Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends.We always have a good time!
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